Review Detail of armordillo in Rogue Villain
Review detail
I'm going to be frank and admit that this story doesn't deserve five stars, but I'm going to give it anyway because I am a shameless author :P The story and writing are slow, and character development isn't any faster. But all of it improves as it goes on, which is why the almost 200 hundred first chapters are free. Read the summary of chapters 1-56 if you like the idea(?) of the story and want to try when it gets slightly better. Other than that, drop any questions down below. PS. I have a fragile soul, so please don't be mean to me, and be gentle with any criticism.
Rogue Villain
armordillo
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I'm not sure just yet since the romance stuff will be at the end of the story and I'm still working on the finer details. I'm leaning toward single fl, but I won't exclude the possibility of harem. But in either case, the lovey-dovey stuff will be like an epilogue and not part of the main story.
Sonu_Siraj_5546:single fl or harem
armordillo:I'm not sure just yet since the romance stuff will be at the end of the story and I'm still working on the finer details. I'm leaning toward single fl, but I won't exclude the possibility of harem. But in either case, the lovey-dovey stuff will be like an epilogue and not part of the main story.
armordillo:I'm not sure just yet since the romance stuff will be at the end of the story and I'm still working on the finer details. I'm leaning toward single fl, but I won't exclude the possibility of harem. But in either case, the lovey-dovey stuff will be like an epilogue and not part of the main story.
hey! just started reading this book and wanted to say that I think the beginning is really good! it's fine to speed up afterwards, but having a somewhat slow pacing in the beginning gives you time to connect with the character. some authors have fast pacing in the beginning and there is no time to get emotionally attached. I haven't gotten more then 20 chapters, but the descriptive beginning makes it so I can understand the mc and am hooked. you are probably way past this book, but I just wanted to leave my opinion. keep up the good writing!
