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Too much unnecessary info dump . Put info at the bottom. Don't add Italian ,asian or etc other name just create some by yourself it will be good.your chapter flow to slow with too much redundant content PLZ work on this . Btw good idea keep working. character development not good . If you improve in will change the rating accordingly.
Tower defense in another world
Vince_Sacay
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Thank you so much for the review, here are my question if it's alright. 1. What do you mean by info dump? Is that those things I added when I introduce a legendary or historical figure? 2. I'm sorry but though I love to make my own set of names, having different words to translate them is much more fun for me, especially when it gives more impact to how it is called compared to english 3. The character development might be slow due to mcs origin, though he lives on his own for 10 years, it didn't apply any ability or insight that is needed in the tower, compared to lucrane who's a veteran on it. 4. Regarding the pacing, I didn't meant it to be slow, just wanted to take some times regarding every floor details and such in a tower, but I'll gladly note your words and find if I could fasten it up a bit, thanks btw 5. And lastly, thanks once again in making a review, your comment will help me find the flows in my story, and it might be tasking but do you have any particular chapter that you find lacking?