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I strongly suggest you to review some system novels, some good system novels, I guess yours is a system too, if I didn't notice it carefully, long paras and it looks like a mess, re edit strongly suggested.

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Infinite Silver Eyes: The Infinite God

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thx for reviewing as for long paragraphs I would love to but they are mostly conversations so it is a bit difficult. As for an editor when have newbie has money hire editor joke apart, you have my sincere thanks for reviewing once again