Review Detail of N0_Hope in Rick and Morty: A New Jerry Journey

The grammar is good, the updates are ok so far and I read 4 chapters... The problem comes when good grammar is used waaay too much. The problem is that repeating a scene for 4 chapters is not necessary and it makes it impossible to enjoy . The main idea of " a guy reincarnated as Jerry" is really good but 4 chapters and the MC is still on the process of being " isekaid" IF he even get's isekaid. . You need to fix the grammar loops , making things easy is better in some points and taking too long for something small makes the story be on a funnel feeling..