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AzKoPo
AzKoPoAuthor4mthAzKoPo

Apperently tradition for the author to support the author so I'm doing just that. Hope you enjoy the story, while it started out as mostly a self insert it quickly developed in a way where I can't in good faith call it that anymore so it's become a character of his own. If the fanfic actually pics some traction I might consider updating it more regularly after I catch up with editing to recent chapters, until then, enjoy! And I don't mind conststructive criticism, as the story was started so I could learn to write better, I think I've come quite far, first chapter has been rewritten quite a few times. And yet even after the final edit and publishing it, I notice missing commas, this is gonna be fun!

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Douluo Dalu: 1st Cycle: Dancing Panda

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Mr_Potatochu
Mr_PotatochuLv4Mr_Potatochu

is the mc a panda or is his spirit a panda?

Nobius
NobiusLv1Nobius

романтика?

AzKoPo
AzKoPoAuthorAzKoPo

Yeah, there'll be romance, but not for a while, all Douluo Dalu needs a bit of romance eventually.

Nobius:романтика?
AzKoPo
AzKoPoAuthorAzKoPo

Spirit is the panda, twin martial souls, panda and a bo staff

Mr_Potatochu:is the mc a panda or is his spirit a panda?
marawa
marawaLv2marawa

Is it Bo or Po? Haha. I enjoy the story