Review Detail of DrAuthor in The Extra's Weight.

mybopinion of this novel is mixed: the worldbuilding is good, i enjoy this type of fantasy worlds and everything is explained pretty well.human intwractions however... holy fuck they are bad: the conversations feel clunky and... inhuman for a lack of better term, the unner thoughts are extremely cringy and once again do not reflect the reality of how people think, they feel clunky and weird. Every single time people speak with eachother, it leaves a weird taste in your mouth, as if something was inherently wrong, and thats because they are. The interactions are way too symplistic and counterfeited so that everything goes as the MC wants, the personality of the characters becomes robotic as if everything has to go as the Mc wants or remembers, people feel way too static and unmoving, they do not rrally have thoughts of their own, the umpression that it gives is that they come briefly online when the mc is there.The interactions with the FL are so clichè and cringy it feels like the author never met someone in his life, nobody asks 30 times "why do you care about me" and nobody stutters every single phrase if they do not have a speech impairment.If people in real life acted as the mc of this novel they would have been dead the first few chapters.