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AkashicLibrary
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Its pretty good hut the something about the way the author writes seem off. The quality is good and there are barely any grammar mistakes and even if there is one its very hard to notice.

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In Jujutsu Kaisen with Time Cursed Technique

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AkashicLibrary
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I reread all the chapters and now i understand. You added a bit to many details and repeated some but in different words. Such as in chapter 18 in the line about the handcuffs. You didnt need to add that he was calm internally while thinking internally. That was why. I guess im being picky rn though

David_555:What seems off?
David_555
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What seems off?