Review Detail of Naayil in Reborn With an AI

To be fair, the story is quite solid for something on Webnovel, but the tropes that are used ruin what normally would have been pretty good. My biggest problem is just how rushed the story is. The synopsis is more or less a bait, the synopsis somewhat promises on the mc fixing his life and that of other around him, but aside from being a streamer to get money he does none of that. He starts streaming Overwatch but we don’t see him grind to get really well known or anything. The author kind of skips over it. But my biggest problem of all isn’t even the MCs ability to get lucky and become super well known with basically just aimboting, my biggest problem is how rushed the story is. The author briefly brushed over the mc being a mathematical genius so he can avoid the MCs schooling, and rushes into a relation ship with his sister. The author said the mc was 13 or 14 at the start of the book, and within 7 chapters he got into a relationship with his sister. If we take into account that he came from ten years in the future he would have been at most 24 when he died. Now, why is someone who was 24 getting into a relationship with his sister who is 15? And it’s how rushed which is the bad part, I’ve seen wishfulfilment fanfics with better romantic development.