Review Detail of Goddess_Luna01 in Two worlds Apart:The Forbidden Love

Item: Two worlds Apart:The Forbidden Love
Rating: 4.6

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Overall, this book is great and filled with potential. I personally like the book. although, my review might come off as odd, but it's just a few suggestions. I think you jumped from 3rd POV to 1st POV a few times. also, a few minor errors(typos, i guess).those aside, I like the book and I'm gonna follow it. Kudos, author!

Two worlds Apart:The Forbidden Love

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Goddess_Luna01Lv11Goddess_Luna01

oh, that's good. thanks for the welcome. I do hope it remains interesting till the end 😘

Webstar3493:It's the style of writing that I chose. Thank you for the nice review and welcome to TWA ✨

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It's the style of writing that I chose. Thank you for the nice review and welcome to TWA ✨

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