Review Detail of omitted in Blade of The End

Well, one republication and 50 chapters later, I think it's time to write a review for my book. It's a great book with a lot of potential. Of course, I'd say that, being the shameless webnovel author that I am, but I really do believe it's a good book, and I love the story a lot. However, being the author, my opinion doesn't really matter much, so I'd love to hear yours. I'll also answer any questions you might have. Thanks for reading!