Review Detail of Darkswan in Poison Master: The Estranged Heiress

I've just finished the first few chapters and will give the review based on that, and so far the story is well written and detailed, grammar is on point. The author describes what needs to be described in such a way that it gives you a vivid picture. It's entertaining, and the characters are likable. From what I've read, there's not much more to say because the story is just getting started, but it has a lot of potential, and I wish the author the best of luck!