Review Detail of Devine_Devil in DEATH ESCAPE

I AM THE AUTHOR AND I WROTE THIS BOOK WITH THE EXACT WAY HOW I IMAGINED A CHARACTOR WOULD BEHAVE AND GROW IN NARUTO WORLD. SO FOR ME IT IS GOOD AND I ALSO TRY TO REM0VE GRAMATIC MISTAKE AS MUCH AS POSSIBLE. ALSO PLEASE SHARE YOUR HONEST OPINION I WILL TRY MY BEST TO IMPROVE. MC IS ABSOLUTELY EVIL, JUST READ UPTO TWENTY CHAPTERS TO KNOW THE REAL PERSONALITY OF THE MC. I WILL TRY MY BEST TO IMPROVE BASED ON YOUR OPINIONS