Review Detail of Starparticle in The Prison Called Life 我

This writer has a great set-up! His word-useage and flow is really nice, and his characters are very believable so far! I really enjoy some of the powerful 'punch' lines he uses to make a point, and to boot, they are smooth and fluid lines that make you go, 'Oooh'. I got shivers reading the last lines of the second chapter. His use of emotional words to convey the feeling of the setting is really nice! It's just starting out, so come and get on the train while it's hot and about to leave the station! I can feel good things coming from this work.