Review Detail of vimbaimurindagomo in Married To My Best Friend (Twisted End)
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It's a beautifully simple plot, with good pace. It takes the reader through the daily routine of our antagonist in a very lively, engaging manner. Which brings the character's world to life, allowing the reader to get to familiarise with their personality. Your discriptions, fluency and use of simple English to make it easy for the reader to easily fall in love with the plot, is pure genius. I notice though that you started chapter 1 by just leaving Aaron Anderson hanging making me want to ask, is that the name of our protagonist? I also noted in chapter1that you opened the account by relating your character in the first person instance, but later on at the end of chapter 1 you switch to relate to your character in the third person instance. Otherwise the book is quite a good read.
Married To My Best Friend (Twisted End)
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Queen_Ana_6615:Thanks for the review🥰🥰 To be honest I'm really excited 🌺This gives me the motive to continue cause I was tired of the low engagement. It was as if the book ain't interesting enough, but now I'm feeling the vibes to continue. So thanks so much🎀🌹 As for the Chapter 1. It's just a way of introducing our main character and his closest friend. So yes, Aaron Anderson is the protagonist. And I find it much better to write in third person's POV than first.
Thanks for the review🥰🥰 To be honest I'm really excited 🌺This gives me the motive to continue cause I was tired of the low engagement. It was as if the book ain't interesting enough, but now I'm feeling the vibes to continue. So thanks so much🎀🌹 As for the Chapter 1. It's just a way of introducing our main character and his closest friend. So yes, Aaron Anderson is the protagonist. And I find it much better to write in third person's POV than first.