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Daoist_Culture
Daoist_CultureLv1510mthDaoist_Culture

Very interesting synopsis. I hope he can have more girls than 13 main ones. And a small question, is there any yuri, kissing, touching between harem members? I hate that stuff... Please give me some info. Thanks

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Zentmeister
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When I said Yuri, I meant like when he's with two girls, and "entertaining" one who is on top of the other, the two girls kiss. Basically standard group stuff. I don't know why you guys are so opposed to what is basically the norm in these situations XD

ImaBEEE:Check the name and cover - nice! Synopsis looks interesting - even better! Tags i like - perfection! Author wants to add yuri even if there was nothing in both synopsis and tags... - dissapointed. Please man, why do they have to go on each other? That always leaves a bad taste. At least add somewhere that there is yuri in the book, i got hyped for nothing.
Zentmeister
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There will be some yuri but mostly when the girls are together with the MC at the same time.

Daoist_Culture
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That feels the same for me, if they eff each other on his eyes or behind his back. Thats still partner sharing for me. Thank you for the info. Sadly its not a book for me, I hate yuri cos it makes all of the cultivated feeling between mc and his harem empty and fake. I read as a self insert and that feels like cheating. A small tip tho, if you go for this much yuri already, just go all out and put a tag. There is nothing in the synopsis as well. Male harem readers dont read yuri, so you can go all out with it and try with female audience. Yuri dont sell when you aim for male audience. As i said, I dont like partner sharing. Good luck with it.

Zentmeister:There will be some yuri but mostly when the girls are together with the MC at the same time.
ImaBEEE
ImaBEEELv1ImaBEEE

Check the name and cover - nice! Synopsis looks interesting - even better! Tags i like - perfection! Author wants to add yuri even if there was nothing in both synopsis and tags... - dissapointed. Please man, why do they have to go on each other? That always leaves a bad taste. At least add somewhere that there is yuri in the book, i got hyped for nothing.

Zentmeister:There will be some yuri but mostly when the girls are together with the MC at the same time.
TwoTankCarMoon
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Nice nice.. I am a male fan of harem and I like yuri so ty. They are his girls in the end who love him and they are in one big harmonious relationship + who doesn’t like 2 of ur girls pecking over the same mushroom between them lol.. pumped to read more!

Zentmeister:There will be some yuri but mostly when the girls are together with the MC at the same time.
TwoTankCarMoon
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+ its really, really weird if ur in a group activity with ur own girls who are close and none of them even ‘touch’ each other during. too unrealistic, but you do you author

Daoist_Culture
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Its not the norm... change genders to 1 girl and 2 guys and ask yourself if that girl would like it. L.u .s.t Knight has a very bih harem and group scenes. There is nothing like that, his girls respect mc, and dont want to be touched by someone else if they have feelings only for him. There are in his harem not in a group of lovers. Whats the point of romance if they cheat on him with others? You can write group fun without it in 100 different ways. Harem readers dont like it, most of us read it as a self insert and it dont feels good. That one guy who likes it is in minority... You can check other harem books and what is the first question to the author. Ntr? yuri? People dont ask that cos they wait it. You do you bro, if you like to write it, do it. For me personaly, its disgusting and a definition of yuri. Even if its in a heat of the moment.

Zentmeister:When I said Yuri, I meant like when he's with two girls, and "entertaining" one who is on top of the other, the two girls kiss. Basically standard group stuff. I don't know why you guys are so opposed to what is basically the norm in these situations XD
Daoist_Culture
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Going at each other and doing double BJ is a different matter, but you already know that. So I guess you like to watch girls doing each other. Enjoy this book bro. I hope there is more of you.

TwoTankCarMoon:Nice nice.. I am a male fan of harem and I like yuri so ty. They are his girls in the end who love him and they are in one big harmonious relationship + who doesn’t like 2 of ur girls pecking over the same mushroom between them lol.. pumped to read more!
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Daoist_Culture
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Aha Yes, realism.. a world with powers, sentient beasts and other races. But harem members being loyal to the mc is so out of touch for you. I read fantasy cos its fantasy not real world.

TwoTankCarMoon:+ its really, really weird if ur in a group activity with ur own girls who are close and none of them even ‘touch’ each other during. too unrealistic, but you do you author
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ImaBEEE
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Im not opposed to it, i just dont like it. I dont have money to buy coins so i have to pick a book and use free-passes... I checked your profile and since you have a contracted work this book will get one as well. I dont want to spend 100 passes only to end up with yuri, that feels like ntr.

Zentmeister:When I said Yuri, I meant like when he's with two girls, and "entertaining" one who is on top of the other, the two girls kiss. Basically standard group stuff. I don't know why you guys are so opposed to what is basically the norm in these situations XD
ImaBEEE
ImaBEEELv1ImaBEEE

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Daoist_Culture:Its not the norm... change genders to 1 girl and 2 guys and ask yourself if that girl would like it. L.u .s.t Knight has a very bih harem and group scenes. There is nothing like that, his girls respect mc, and dont want to be touched by someone else if they have feelings only for him. There are in his harem not in a group of lovers. Whats the point of romance if they cheat on him with others? You can write group fun without it in 100 different ways. Harem readers dont like it, most of us read it as a self insert and it dont feels good. That one guy who likes it is in minority... You can check other harem books and what is the first question to the author. Ntr? yuri? People dont ask that cos they wait it. You do you bro, if you like to write it, do it. For me personaly, its disgusting and a definition of yuri. Even if its in a heat of the moment.
TwoTankCarMoon
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bro, I really don't know why you're crying over this. exaggerating, passive aggressive, ect.. how is going at each other with lips and other touching during a double bj a different matter to you and apparently something acceptable to you, while you mention earlier that you dont like any touching between the girls whatsoever. makes no sense. and yes, there are different aspects to realism. in game of thrones there are dragons and magic, but you wouldn't expect daenerys to cheat on jon snow with his horse now, would you. as I said if you got a group of say 8 of your wives during group activity, are the others just gonna sit there twiddling their thumbs? is he gonna grow extra appendages? no. these close sisters are gonna have fun with each other, anything else is nonsense I guess you and me see cheating differently, because a harmonious close relationship where him and his wives keep it in the group is fun to me, and he likes what he sees, with them enjoying each other as a family with him in control and them all loving him and the way things work between them, I don't see it as anything close to cheating, so while I get your tastes, I disagree. all I will say on this. but like u said to me, hope your find a novel you genuinely like as ur next one

Daoist_Culture:Aha Yes, realism.. a world with powers, sentient beasts and other races. But harem members being loyal to the mc is so out of touch for you. I read fantasy cos its fantasy not real world.
Daoist_Culture
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It is different, since they have a desi re for mc and not for each other, he is still the fpcus of the activity. And when we have more than 2, like you pointed out, and they do 69 for each other cos its a burden for them to wait a bit, yeah that not for me. Stuff like that develop feeling and l.u s.t between harem members. And when there is group fun they dont really need mc since they can have fun with each other. Thats my opinion on the matter, and thats why for me its not being loyal and feels like ntr. I really dont like stuff like that, so it if sounded a bit passive aggressive, than sorry. Im not crying, im just asking questions and write my 2 cents. And you dont need to worry, I have lots of works without it. I like to add new books and support them, cos lots of it get dropped around 20chaps. But I dont want to go in, without any info. Have a nice day.

TwoTankCarMoon:bro, I really don't know why you're crying over this. exaggerating, passive aggressive, ect.. how is going at each other with lips and other touching during a double bj a different matter to you and apparently something acceptable to you, while you mention earlier that you dont like any touching between the girls whatsoever. makes no sense. and yes, there are different aspects to realism. in game of thrones there are dragons and magic, but you wouldn't expect daenerys to cheat on jon snow with his horse now, would you. as I said if you got a group of say 8 of your wives during group activity, are the others just gonna sit there twiddling their thumbs? is he gonna grow extra appendages? no. these close sisters are gonna have fun with each other, anything else is nonsense I guess you and me see cheating differently, because a harmonious close relationship where him and his wives keep it in the group is fun to me, and he likes what he sees, with them enjoying each other as a family with him in control and them all loving him and the way things work between them, I don't see it as anything close to cheating, so while I get your tastes, I disagree. all I will say on this. but like u said to me, hope your find a novel you genuinely like as ur next one
TwoTankCarMoon
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ok no problem, ty for being cordial. yes I understand we have different tastes and disagree on this and that's fair. got to play the numbers game lol. u have a good day too bro

Daoist_Culture:It is different, since they have a desi re for mc and not for each other, he is still the fpcus of the activity. And when we have more than 2, like you pointed out, and they do 69 for each other cos its a burden for them to wait a bit, yeah that not for me. Stuff like that develop feeling and l.u s.t between harem members. And when there is group fun they dont really need mc since they can have fun with each other. Thats my opinion on the matter, and thats why for me its not being loyal and feels like ntr. I really dont like stuff like that, so it if sounded a bit passive aggressive, than sorry. Im not crying, im just asking questions and write my 2 cents. And you dont need to worry, I have lots of works without it. I like to add new books and support them, cos lots of it get dropped around 20chaps. But I dont want to go in, without any info. Have a nice day.
NovelSpartan
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Note to my future self - dont belive tags, read reviews. Not even 10 chaps in and yuri started. From a cute 1st partner to someone who needs another girl to go off day after meeting her "mate". Just sad.

Daoist_Culture
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Wow, that was fast. I can only imagine what will be in 30-50-100 chaps his girls wont even look for him in heat, sonce they have each other. Ehh I hate yuri.

NovelSpartan:Note to my future self - dont belive tags, read reviews. Not even 10 chaps in and yuri started. From a cute 1st partner to someone who needs another girl to go off day after meeting her "mate". Just sad.
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TwoTankCarMoon
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lol the exaggeration.. for anyone curious - this is not true, she doesn't 'need' anything from another woman to get off from now on. the god literally positioned and pressed her on top of a woman with some nice mountains, while the god was going at that other woman and then her, and the mountains look good while being right in front of her face where the god positioned her, so why not her give them a little suck? means nuthin.. it's a three some.. she would have got off just fine without that lol but was just having fun and they were right there, where he basically positioned her head, so why not. this comment is like the author - making mountains out of nothing. not liking girls touching is fine tho, personal tastes.. I understand that, but she doesn't require another girl to get off at all from now on. its just not true, for anyone curious

NovelSpartan:Note to my future self - dont belive tags, read reviews. Not even 10 chaps in and yuri started. From a cute 1st partner to someone who needs another girl to go off day after meeting her "mate". Just sad.
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NovelSpartan
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"...including Sora, who gazed at her (spoiler, thats the other girl) with a l.u. s.t. filled expression..." Sora wants her too, and not only mc.

TwoTankCarMoon:lol the exaggeration.. for anyone curious - this is not true, she doesn't 'need' anything from another woman to get off from now on. the god literally positioned and pressed her on top of a woman with some nice mountains, while the god was going at that other woman and then her, and the mountains look good while being right in front of her face where the god positioned her, so why not her give them a little suck? means nuthin.. it's a three some.. she would have got off just fine without that lol but was just having fun and they were right there, where he basically positioned her head, so why not. this comment is like the author - making mountains out of nothing. not liking girls touching is fine tho, personal tastes.. I understand that, but she doesn't require another girl to get off at all from now on. its just not true, for anyone curious
TwoTankCarMoon
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Sora was literally positioned by him with her head directly on top of those mountains, with Sora being worked from behind by him, and she was in the moment with some hot mountains in front of her face in an amorous environment, so why not? absolutely nothing indicates she 'needed' to bite them mountains to get off, or 'needs' other women to get off. not now, nor in the future, which is what u said. if ur partner sticks a delicious lollipop in front of ur face during a meal, ur probably gonna give it a couple licks, right? that absolutely does not mean ur gonna need lollipops with every meal in the future to feel ur hunger gone, or ur hunger will never be satisfied again. this is a non-issue

NovelSpartan:"...including Sora, who gazed at her (spoiler, thats the other girl) with a l.u. s.t. filled expression..." Sora wants her too, and not only mc.
Daoist_Culture
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I saw some notifications on my review, so indexided to check and read those first chaps. And I have to say its a nice plot. Your lemons are very good too, too bad I cant stand yuri. I never imagined that my free 5star and a question will bring so much drama. If you feel like it have a negative influence on your book I can delete it. I add lots of new harem books and support the one i like, cos lots of them get dropped due to lack of interest. So that was one on my 3-4 posts that day. It turned into a drama post sadly. Let me know and I ll delete it. And as you see adding girls fun is not "playing the numbers" 😅. Im almost 6 years on wn, and trust me you cut more than half of your potential readers with stuff like it. If you ever want to write a cultured novel with loyal partners let me know, I m not shy with some gifts kekeke. Good day mr author.

TwoTankCarMoon:ok no problem, ty for being cordial. yes I understand we have different tastes and disagree on this and that's fair. got to play the numbers game lol. u have a good day too bro