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Zetsway
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I read until chapter 4 so, if this is some type of masterpiece after those 4 chapters, you guys can only suffer to find out, I couldn't. The main problem with this is frustration. The MC is stupid, so you get frustrated with his thought process. When I saw that it was someone with the omnitrix in DC, I was actually hoping for that person to use his watch to improve all the aspects of his life. With certain aliens, he can become a millionaire in a few days, but from what I see the MC is just like Ben, only using the watch to fight his episodic enemies with no 'life' between the fights...

OMNITRIX (DC)

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Nefret5335
Nefret5335Lv1Nefret5335

It wasn't that bad, I'm on the last chapter now

mow
mowLv4mow

Yeah It was disappointing I got excited for nothing.

Zetsway
ZetswayLv12Zetsway

First impressions are crucial in novels.

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ALEX1402
ALEX1402Lv4ALEX1402

Yeah. Even if mc was not a smart guy transforming into an alien which is super smart like grey matter or brain storm, he can make a proper plan for future taking into account what he may have to face for future. Heck without the watch Ben was powerless to some extend, so some gadgets and power serums to enhance himself. Seriously a lot can be accomplished with the watch if used properly. Heck dc has lots of clones running around. Last thing you want is your omnitrix going to enemy because he has your DNA. Ben was lucky to have his grandpa else he would would dead or in some human experimentation lab.

Zetsway:First impressions are crucial in novels.
Pepcintu
PepcintuLv3Pepcintu

Don't try to imply that it gets better, it does not.

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SOMMO_ARCANO
SOMMO_ARCANOLv2SOMMO_ARCANO

Ben is op aa human, he is stronger human max fighting skill, expert in technology and many alien leanguage, culture ans more

ALEX1402:Yeah. Even if mc was not a smart guy transforming into an alien which is super smart like grey matter or brain storm, he can make a proper plan for future taking into account what he may have to face for future. Heck without the watch Ben was powerless to some extend, so some gadgets and power serums to enhance himself. Seriously a lot can be accomplished with the watch if used properly. Heck dc has lots of clones running around. Last thing you want is your omnitrix going to enemy because he has your DNA. Ben was lucky to have his grandpa else he would would dead or in some human experimentation lab.
ALEX1402
ALEX1402Lv4ALEX1402

A 10 yrs old ben or an adult ben with a kid who have lifetime of experience. Let us be honest here if Ben 10 was not a kids show he would have been dead long time ago. All it needs is one head shot and done. Heck even in alien force he was at most a competent football player not some god tire martial arts champion. What will the mc of fic do when ‘light’ gets interested in his watch and sends assassins after him? If someone like deathstroke goes after him all he needs is few days of research and mc is done for. When omnitrix is in timeout dude is most vulnerable. Even Ben was knocked out in series with a strong blow to head as human. And if some how darkside got to know about mc, he has a deadliest version of vilgax after him cause darkside can definitely hack in omnitrix. So yeah even with all the experience ben has he is no match to likes of slade Wilson and demon head.

SOMMO_ARCANO:Ben is op aa human, he is stronger human max fighting skill, expert in technology and many alien leanguage, culture ans more
SOMMO_ARCANO
SOMMO_ARCANOLv2SOMMO_ARCANO

omnitrix protects the life of the host, if ben is in danger time can extend and last longer, can't hack omnitrix and a semi sentient biological thing containing a small universe or world, i don't think they ever hacked lantern ring green same thing for the omnitrix, when was it knocked out? if he does have problems he can use gray matter and have master control

Zetsway
ZetswayLv12Zetsway

What are you even talking about? What I said in my review was that he was not using his powers smartly, only to fight enemies. He has aliens in the Omnitrix that are able allow his to be just like Tony Stark and make a bunch of 'inventions' from scrap metal and such. Then patent those inventions.

SOMMO_ARCANO:omnitrix protects the life of the host, if ben is in danger time can extend and last longer, can't hack omnitrix and a semi sentient biological thing containing a small universe or world, i don't think they ever hacked lantern ring green same thing for the omnitrix, when was it knocked out? if he does have problems he can use gray matter and have master control
SOMMO_ARCANO
SOMMO_ARCANOLv2SOMMO_ARCANO

I was answer to another recension

Zetsway:What are you even talking about? What I said in my review was that he was not using his powers smartly, only to fight enemies. He has aliens in the Omnitrix that are able allow his to be just like Tony Stark and make a bunch of 'inventions' from scrap metal and such. Then patent those inventions.
ALEX1402
ALEX1402Lv4ALEX1402

I get what you are trying to say bro but DC is not a world to be underestimated. Mc can be mindcontrolled. Vilgax was able to obtain omnitrix with help of Kevin. Also darkside is multiversal entity, dude can definitely hack omnitrix. Also dc has people who could create multiverse level of forces like speed force. So yeah I saw the wiki about fail safes but I still feel that dc universe can have someone who could defeat mc and obtain omnitrix.

SOMMO_ARCANO:omnitrix protects the life of the host, if ben is in danger time can extend and last longer, can't hack omnitrix and a semi sentient biological thing containing a small universe or world, i don't think they ever hacked lantern ring green same thing for the omnitrix, when was it knocked out? if he does have problems he can use gray matter and have master control
Groundcoronet62
Groundcoronet62Lv2Groundcoronet62

Yes but the omnitrix was specifically designed by the most smartest individual of the most smartest species in the galaxy to be literally impenetrable. It simply cannot be hacked and the closest the watch got to being hacked was over exposure to magic which was later "patched" so it no longer malfunctions in the prescence of magic. That and the watch makes mind controlling its user impossible. This was even stated in an episode in the series tho i dont remember which one. You know the watch has some crazy defences when the self-destruct system literally blows up a whole galaxy when fully charged. Using comic logic we can deduce that the watch cant be "hacked" nor can the mc be "mind-controlled" as long as they have the omnitrix on them. Mc also wont be dying from gunshots anytime soon cuz the watch has a fail-safe system where itll automatically transform the user into the best race for the situation the mc is in. This was also seen several times in ben 10 omniverse series.

ALEX1402:I get what you are trying to say bro but DC is not a world to be underestimated. Mc can be mindcontrolled. Vilgax was able to obtain omnitrix with help of Kevin. Also darkside is multiversal entity, dude can definitely hack omnitrix. Also dc has people who could create multiverse level of forces like speed force. So yeah I saw the wiki about fail safes but I still feel that dc universe can have someone who could defeat mc and obtain omnitrix.
Sharky_Monster
Sharky_MonsterLv11Sharky_Monster

If you have seen Omniverse, then you know, Omnitrix will saved 2 times Ben lives, even when he destroyed.

ALEX1402:A 10 yrs old ben or an adult ben with a kid who have lifetime of experience. Let us be honest here if Ben 10 was not a kids show he would have been dead long time ago. All it needs is one head shot and done. Heck even in alien force he was at most a competent football player not some god tire martial arts champion. What will the mc of fic do when ‘light’ gets interested in his watch and sends assassins after him? If someone like deathstroke goes after him all he needs is few days of research and mc is done for. When omnitrix is in timeout dude is most vulnerable. Even Ben was knocked out in series with a strong blow to head as human. And if some how darkside got to know about mc, he has a deadliest version of vilgax after him cause darkside can definitely hack in omnitrix. So yeah even with all the experience ben has he is no match to likes of slade Wilson and demon head.
Queen_Karina
Queen_KarinaLv14Queen_Karina

This is a common trait for this authors mcs, I’m not even surprised