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Review Detail of Klankon in Sacrifice's Rise: I Became Invincible After Entering Godslayer Temple

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The novel has a lot of potential, but the author seams to be making stuff up as he goes, forgets about things(buying house and car in rl), he forgets about skill level(divine blade), we never learn about what lvl the mc is after the initial chapters etc. The fact that the mc takes almost every woman he meats into the bead despide having a gf is also questionable. Please take some time to check what you write, the novel has great potential but rushing it is destroying it.

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Sacrifice's Rise: I Became Invincible After Entering Godslayer Temple

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