Review Detail of Novel_Meditation in Black Material Hunting System

The writing and smut is good. There is room for improvement in plot and story. Good stories involve drama and overcoming obstacles. If it becomes too easy the story will not be as interesting. I have some suggestions. Allow for some setbacks and avoid any direct form of system inducing slavery or mind control. By using the system to improve himself and providing him the tools he can overcome the situations, destroying the notion of resistence. For example, if the rich lady hires someone to assassinate the MC, or play some tricks such as attempted poisoning, steal the phone, blackmail the MC in return, or whatever scenario you come up with. All these events will allow for the MC to use these setbacks to improve, grow and develop while showcasing his acquired skills. You don't have to force situations or plot as they are already built in. You just have to excavate and build upon your story. The eventual submission in his relationships will also be more satisfying and provide sense of accomplishment. Another important point is consistency. Such as staying on top of the system with distribution of rewards and improvements. It will help with story pacing. Nobody forgets about level ups and improvements. Why would anyone not immediately at the press of a button continually improve their physique or looks when available. If the MC doesn't care, why should I as the reader care? Part of what makes the system or litrpg aspect interesting is seeing or tracking the characters growth. The story so far has been pretty good in that aspect so far. Maybe you can find away to build or incorporate the system checks with his morning routine or make it a habit after each encounter.