Review Detail of ShadexRay in Card Fighters Recreation Fanfiction

The story has good potential especially considering it's a Card Fighter fanfiction clash combined with the system element. Though, the story suffers from one glaring problem, the writing quality. The poor grammar and editing could be massively improved. The mistakes are prominent and quite distracting. The flow and the structure of the sentences doesn't provide an immersive experience. I recommend the author to use Grammarly or any proofreading app. Nevertheless, I believe the author can massively improve. Good luck!