I like it! The story looks promising and the system works well with the narration. The names are not my liking, but they don't hinder the story. Keep writing, author!!! 👍💕💕💕 kudos Wilde
Thank you so much, oh ooof my bad. Went lazy on the names, an choose some that I remember, an went to write on the storyline, it a bit complex. I will change the names it a bit more alive😁