Review Detail of Critique_1000 in the beginning from the realm of primal chaos
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I like this book but it kind of messy works.I can understand what the author want to write but you will feel the way story develop is like chasing something you know like the way wishs been use and mc like slightly wise but his mind is kinda dumb to use the wish effiencely.It like the mc not view the world like real also please hope there's no 4 wall break it bring down the quality workcause the development is good but unstable like his use of power is uneffecient in way for mc become stronger.But I like this work cause it about travel around worlds and sorry to say something rude about your work author.Still stay strong for future adventure.
the beginning from the realm of primal chaos
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Hmm, first I would like to thank you very much for your review, no need to apologize after all your opinion is very constructive for someone as inexperienced as me, I would even like to thank you man Well let's put it aside, to tell the truth, I also understand the anarchism of the book, but well please understand that I am writing this book because I can't find any book remotely about Primal Chaos to suit my tastes and even books that are barely intolerable in quality in which I find a lot of things unacceptable to me. That's why I wrote this book I no longer have a plan and this is the cause of the chaos where I intend something and then change my mind a lot, and it also happens that I forget what I intended to do or even the purpose of doing it... Basically, this book is a reader's book, not a writer's book. Hmm, I hope you understand what I mean Finally, the wisdom of Agios basically means knowledge or intelligence. I do not mean intelligence to act or something like that. What I mean is only scientific, kinetic and combative intelligence. In any case, your comment is useful, and I will take it into account in my next work, God willing Then thanks and have a nice day