This is a pretty decent story, likeable characters, decent writing, decent humor, unique premise with a lot of potential at the time of my writing this though which is 82 chapters in it is dealing with a pitfall a lot of stories fall into in that the story feels like it gets stuck a lot. The author is moving the plot forward but it is pretty slow and there are a lot of stretches where the story feels like a car spinning it’s wheels in the mud a lot of noise and the car is doing something, but nothing is happening. I would recommend it because of what I listed first but just heads up.
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