Review Detail of Pengu1n_69 in Naruto : The Demon Swordsman

Language is good, but abilities falling from the sky is annoying, mc takes 3 for zero price and makes it double, while remaining non op if we can trust to author. Prologue feels like useless, because all it does is choosing abilities that are not op but it is, and explaining that all 45yrs of his life was essential only for not womiting while killing. Overall about 3/5, good lang and nice worldview, but all overwritten by bombarding mc with gifts, like author himself didn't know what build mc will be using