Review Detail of in Deviant: No Longer Human

I've read the free available chapters (till chapter 20, I think it was). it's riddled with grammar mistakes, misgendering, and at some points, even misnaming. the story is rather promising, but unfortunately, 20 chapters is far too short for me to get a proper feel for whether I want to use coins or fast passes for this novel or not. if the author had been less greedy and locked chapters at chap 40-50 I might've put some coins into it. but as I said, the author is too greedy, and this novel is mediocre at best so not worth it.