Review Detail of TheOne_Tak3mi in Percy Jackson: the dark souls survivor

I'm still at the beginning chapters.it's well written, but I did notice one crucial thing that's missing at the beginning. and that's emotion, we really don't see much of what Percy is feeling. for example, being scared when he wakes up alone in a cell, his first kill, etc. I know it's mentioned that he's being strong so that he can meet his mother again, but at least show something.it does get better as the chapters go by, so it's not gonna be an issue for long if the improvement continues.