Review Detail of _Re_ in My Transcendence 漢

3.8, i cant hold myself to give a non-honest review, so here we go: Writing, all good, paragraphs ain't too long, reading flow could improve a bit, but everything is still well. However, we got something about the pacing in the early chaps. its way too jumpy, the usage of elipsis '...' to seperate between events are ... too frequent. Tbh, it really break the immersion as the scene jumping one to another frequently in one chaps. Making the <4 chaps kinda vague. I know u wanted to establish a robust background about the mc but ... it just way too jumpy and unfocused. Pacing started to gain momentum at chap 4, but the event jumping is still bugging. These events and scenes need to be smoothed out between them. Something had to be done to balance out the 'telling' aspect with the 'showing' aspect of the plot. Really-really need it. Then about the update stability, 1 chp/day is the bare minimum, seeing how new the novel and the published chap, seems like the author had the ability to achieve the said stability, keep going. Synopsys, it's hooking quite well, good job at that! Overall, yeah, something had to be done with the pacing, it kinda betray the well thought plot. Keep on the grind!