Review Detail of hero4hire in Harry potter: The ringmaker
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MC recieved OP system that got him SSS+ magic talent potion and OP ring blueprint and MC whine about how system is abusive and how badly its treating him. Also, he seems he seem fanboy hero worship type when he muse he want to be bff with harry pottter and hope dumbledore let him. Author my review my seems harsh but you have to see how its coming off to a random reader when you write mc personality this way.
Harry potter: The ringmaker
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1. The potion basically gave him magic+ as you said it makes his spells more powerful for the same effort how is that not OP for the development of his magic. Also the potion gave him the ability to sense magic which is not necessarily OP but is easy to make OP. 2. He made an OP ring that stopped Dumbledore immediately so yes OP system. Also if he had no skill he would've ruined that first ring so it had to have given him skill.
OMN1CR0N_GAMING:A couple issues with this review. First: the potion didn’t give him any talent with magic, it just made his magic stronger than the average wizard so if he used the same spell against a person who put the same effort and time into learning the spell as him his would just have more power, it didn’t instantly make him an insanely talented super genius at magic like you seem to be claiming. Second: while the system has the POTENTIAL to let him make some powerful stuff it only gave him the knowledge of the smithing style and none of the skill, so he knows how to make strong rings but he isn’t anywhere near skilled enough to do so and will have to actually practice smithing to get the necessary skill to use more advanced techniques and make stronger rings, in one chapter when he tried using a method to make a ring stronger he wound up bedridden with severe flu like symptoms for like a week
A couple issues with this review. First: the potion didn’t give him any talent with magic, it just made his magic stronger than the average wizard so if he used the same spell against a person who put the same effort and time into learning the spell as him his would just have more power, it didn’t instantly make him an insanely talented super genius at magic like you seem to be claiming. Second: while the system has the POTENTIAL to let him make some powerful stuff it only gave him the knowledge of the smithing style and none of the skill, so he knows how to make strong rings but he isn’t anywhere near skilled enough to do so and will have to actually practice smithing to get the necessary skill to use more advanced techniques and make stronger rings, in one chapter when he tried using a method to make a ring stronger he wound up bedridden with severe flu like symptoms for like a week