Review Detail of youareme in Omniverse: The Orderless Worlds
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Aurthor here as this is my first story there may be some mistakes, so all the criticism as requested. I hope you enjoy this story and the upload schedule will depend on the time.
Omniverse: The Orderless Worlds
youareme
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Well you know such types of things depends on how the main character, but the current one in the story isn't the type to do it as for why, well his past will explain it. He is someone who doesn't care for the misfortune of other and in fact to the current point in the story hasn't shown who he truly is. The only thing that is shown is a shell of he was. After all not everyone wants to have all the girls.
JackYoda:Are there +18 senas in the story or is it just a harem? And let's be honest here, if you had the power to be on top of everyone, and be able to go to thousands of worlds, worlds where female characters did not have a good ending or simply the protagonist of the original stories did not deserve it (like a herbivorous protagonist from several stories out there that make the heroines run after them only to end up with none of them or simply choose just one) Tell me, tell me to my face if you had the power, wouldn't you have them in your harem?Do you have an opportunity that millions of people would kill for and not do it? Limiting the harem forces the protagonist to leave the heroines, even those with a bad ending, at the mercy of fate and the protagonists,And first of all, for me, a harem without +18 is stupid because it's nothing more than a collection of girls, If so, it's better to leave them to the mercy of fate, maybe that way they'll have a better ending than just being a trophy on a shelf full of them.
Well sorry that was my mistake, there will be no chat group. The one written in the synopsis is from my first draft of this story. I forget to put it out.
Nekomancer99:Hmm I'm not sure if its intentional but your synopsis for the story give the impression that there will be a group chat, is that still true?
No problem just wanted to give a heads up to you about it so people don't get false expectations thanks for responding
youareme:Well sorry that was my mistake, there will be no chat group. The one written in the synopsis is from my first draft of this story. I forget to put it out.image
Let's not answer that for now. After all such types of number change. After all as I write the story I may come to like some characters that I hadn't planned to join in the harem and may add them.
Jonathan4star:How many harem members will there be
Are there +18 senas in the story or is it just a harem? And let's be honest here, if you had the power to be on top of everyone, and be able to go to thousands of worlds, worlds where female characters did not have a good ending or simply the protagonist of the original stories did not deserve it (like a herbivorous protagonist from several stories out there that make the heroines run after them only to end up with none of them or simply choose just one) Tell me, tell me to my face if you had the power, wouldn't you have them in your harem?Do you have an opportunity that millions of people would kill for and not do it? Limiting the harem forces the protagonist to leave the heroines, even those with a bad ending, at the mercy of fate and the protagonists,And first of all, for me, a harem without +18 is stupid because it's nothing more than a collection of girls, If so, it's better to leave them to the mercy of fate, maybe that way they'll have a better ending than just being a trophy on a shelf full of them.
youareme:Let's not answer that for now. After all such types of number change. After all as I write the story I may come to like some characters that I hadn't planned to join in the harem and may add them.
youareme:Let's not answer that for now. After all such types of number change. After all as I write the story I may come to like some characters that I hadn't planned to join in the harem and may add them.
