Review Detail of LordRay in The Legend of the Demon Fenris

Item: The Legend of the Demon Fenris
Rating: 4

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LordRayLv111yrLordRay

after the reading the first chapter the writing quality was good the characters where more or less ok as well although i do have one complain but it miht just be a nitpick is the troupe of the spoiled step sibling bullying the main character :/

The Legend of the Demon Fenris

Madamaru

Liked it!

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MadamaruAuthorMadamaru

The brother gets better later on. Think of him like Katsuki Bakugou in a way. Over the next two chapters, he's going to be maturing a bit but still bitter towards Fenris, holding in a grudge.

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