the only thing I did not like in this story is how you introduce another reincarnated person as the romantic interest of the MC. really? it made the MC hide some of his capabilities because of fear of being found out by the girl that he is also a reincarnated person. you made the story complicated you even made the other character to get the credit of creating black powder for the new rifle because you don't want the girl to know that the MC is also from the future.
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