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So far, is good. Just a little lacking in adding a sign like an exclamation mark or whatever it is in some dialogue. The plot is quite interesting for me. Most importantly, the description of the situation shouldn't be overlooked, but it certainly doesn't need to be as detailed. Because if not, then the reader will feel quite bored.Maybe that's all for me.keep it up, authors!

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Thanks, I'll be sure to add more exclamations in dialogues, I personally don't use much exclamation mark when texting, so that's probably drained into my dialogue creations. I'll make sure to put that to consideration, thanks!