Review Detail of Scarlet_Wolf96 in InHarmony

So far, is good. Just a little lacking in adding a sign like an exclamation mark or whatever it is in some dialogue. The plot is quite interesting for me. Most importantly, the description of the situation shouldn't be overlooked, but it certainly doesn't need to be as detailed. Because if not, then the reader will feel quite bored.Maybe that's all for me.keep it up, authors!