Review Detail of Fragasile in Reincarnated in Touhou with the Trolling system

This has got to be the most cringe I’ve ever felt reading a touhou fic. This is written so badly that the only way to redeem it is to rewrite everything from scratch, as it has no redeeming qualities whatsoever to speak of. Writing quality: On par with the worst Wattpad amateur fanfics that was given zero thought or any proofreading. Did you even read what you’ve written? There’s no way you live in the USA right now with the abysmal English being used to write this. Characters: Horrible, just plain horrible. The MC is annoying in the worst ways, an obvious archetype of the “millennial writing* protags that just won’t shut up and let the story flow. Your depiction of the touhou girls aren’t any better either, it’s so barebones and derived from fanon lore that it makes me question if you’ve even engaged in the official manga or written works. Plot: What plot? It’s all just a bunch of nonsense and you copying the story of the games, except you make it worse. It’s written like a script with no real sense of immersion, something akin to an elementary schooler writing a story. The way you present the lore is done so badly that even an AI could make something more accurate. Your trolling system barely has any trolling being done too, you do a bunch of meta and 4th wall talk like it’s somehow humorous? Nothing about this is the least bit funny, the worst kind of marvel writing I’ve seen to date. If I could, I’d rate this story a 0 or a negative number from how bad it is.