So from what I have read. The story is pretty decent. Characters are fleshed out and there is a world that I am eager to explore. But I believe that there are quite a few grammar and sentence structure mistakes. The mistakes really take the immersion out of the reading. I hope the author improves on his mistakes. But other than that, I am enjoying this story.
JALLEN
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