Review Detail of UelUel in Bastard to District Fantasy

The story is interesting but somehow, the lack of dialogue makes it feel like there's a bit of a lack when it comes to portraying the personality of characters something like that. Also, the content of the characters is very short which makes it like I'm reading a report rather than a chapter of a novel. Although each chapter is really intriguing and made me want to know what will happen in the next chapters ahead. Overall, this work really has its own potential. Keep working on it, Author.