Breath catching, to say the least. The moment I finished Nobu's flashback (Chapter 4), I realized that this fiction might, probably, have the potential to become really known! I really enjoyed the world-building as well. The magic system seems a tiny bit different as well. Anyway, to summarize, I think this novel has the potential. Keep it up, can't wait for the next chapters ^^
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