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The beginning of this book introduces us to the protagonist, Summer, and her relationships with her family members, especially her mother, and father. The dialogue and interactions between the characters seem realistic and provide insight into their personalities and relationships. Summer's character is portrayed as someone who is struggling to balance her personal life and her responsibilities as the heiress to her father's company. The narrative also introduces us to another character, Cherish, who seems to share some similar experiences with Summer. The story is engaging, with a focus on the complexities of family dynamics and personal growth. It is clear that the author intends to explore themes of self-discovery, responsibility, and friendship as the book progresses. Although there are some pacing issues, such as the quick introduction of characters and events, the story has the potential to develop into an intriguing tale of personal transformation and the challenges of living under the spotlight. Overall, the beginning of this book holds promise and has the potential to keep readers engaged with its relatable characters and thought-provoking themes. However, some improvements in pacing and the development of the plot would enhance the reading experience.

HE IS MY OBSESSION

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Thanks a lot for your suggestions and encouragement. I promise to work in line with your advice.