Review Detail of Yoish in I got my scholarship and transfer to the... "Wrong School?!!"

overall the concept seems to be solid but the it has some problems such as how the author doesn't use quotations so it can be hard to discern what is dialogue well, we also lack an understanding of the characters so for our perspective they just do stuff to do stuff, a little fast paced (this one is just preference), the actually format is weird (you'll understand when you start reading), the use of emojis breaks the immersion, and the parenthesis being used to both describe thoughts, and actions as well can be a little jarring