Review Detail of Brandon_5903 in Surviving the Apocalypse in the Multiverse

From what I have read the first chapter creates a good foundation for the story to be built up upon. The characters are described well. But at least for me the description of the world itself should be flushed out more. The first chapter sets up several intriguing story pieces as the parents and the experiment the MC went. It would befit the story in saying it's in the future this would give more creative freedom to work with more sci fi ideas and concepts that may befit your overall story like alien races, planets or other kinds of things that would give your story a more distinctive feel. But i think it's a good story and we'll be sure to keep up with it