Review Detail of Alejandr0 in In Naruto With Minato Template
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Before you start reading this fic I warn you that the MC is OP and the label (weak to strong) is false. The title of this fic is also fake, it doesn't have anything resembling a template, it's just a system that gives him a lot of powers that Minato Namikaze has and doesn't have. The author always makes the MC fight without using all of his abilities and powers and the battles last 3 or 5 chapters. Great possibilities of HAREM and if not INO and an OC that the author created in a journey that lasted from chapter 100 to 162 that apart from obtaining "conqueror haki" and Fūinjutsu from Mito Uzumaki himself added an OC UZUMAKI as a love interest, completely eliminating to Karin Uzumaki and the trip to the past does not affect her future at all. After returning and starting Naruto Shippuden, the author weakens the MC again and in the end takes away the system and everything he obtained. In short, this starts off bad and gets worse over time. There may also be trips to other worlds or a crossing of worlds. And these are important examples, then there are more details to continue mentioning how bad this FAN-FICS is.
In Naruto With Minato Template
kamidemond
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I actually agree. I back then started writing this fic for just fun and just did whatever I wanted to. Later on I realized that making MC too OP is a bad idea. I am just grateful that so many people like this fic even this fic having soo many plot holes and problems. I really wanted to solve many of the problems later but each try comes with a price not to mention, some mistake in the plot are not fixable. Still, I will be truely Grateful if you still read it. Consider its an first try of a novice author
In my opinion your other fanfic (Naruto: The Untouchable) is much better than this one. I recommend that you finish this fanfic (In Naruto with Minato Template) and then take it as an example of what you don't have to do and also see the mistakes you made. Another thing is that the title and the content do not match, I personally felt cheated. The other thing is the labels and if you doubt or decide on another one, change them so that the reader knows. Your idea is interesting, but try to further develop the MC and those who are important to him, this includes romantic interests. I hope this fanfic gets rewritten in the future.
kamidemond:I actually agree. I back then started writing this fic for just fun and just did whatever I wanted to. Later on I realized that making MC too OP is a bad idea. I am just grateful that so many people like this fic even this fic having soo many plot holes and problems. I really wanted to solve many of the problems later but each try comes with a price not to mention, some mistake in the plot are not fixable. Still, I will be truely Grateful if you still read it. Consider its an first try of a novice author
Alejandr0:In my opinion your other fanfic (Naruto: The Untouchable) is much better than this one. I recommend that you finish this fanfic (In Naruto with Minato Template) and then take it as an example of what you don't have to do and also see the mistakes you made. Another thing is that the title and the content do not match, I personally felt cheated. The other thing is the labels and if you doubt or decide on another one, change them so that the reader knows. Your idea is interesting, but try to further develop the MC and those who are important to him, this includes romantic interests. I hope this fanfic gets rewritten in the future.
kamidemond:I actually agree. I back then started writing this fic for just fun and just did whatever I wanted to. Later on I realized that making MC too OP is a bad idea. I am just grateful that so many people like this fic even this fic having soo many plot holes and problems. I really wanted to solve many of the problems later but each try comes with a price not to mention, some mistake in the plot are not fixable. Still, I will be truely Grateful if you still read it. Consider its an first try of a novice author