poor execution of plot. standard statutory r@pe and pedophilia grooming. low intelligence mc and author. nonsense system that slows the pacing and has multiple plot holes in just about every other chapter.
kamidemond
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LIKEI didn't say I didn't like it đ although it is a terrible read, I was just giving my honest opinion in review. it would improve significantly if you stopped the pedophilia and grooming children and you just, I don't know wrote a story that was about someone in the Naruto world with a template system that has a consistent plot
kamidemond:sorry to hear did not like still need a lot to learn about writing
DragonslayerKnight:I didn't say I didn't like it đ although it is a terrible read, I was just giving my honest opinion in review. it would improve significantly if you stopped the pedophilia and grooming children and you just, I don't know wrote a story that was about someone in the Naruto world with a template system that has a consistent plot
MajorLove_Gravy:what do you mean grooming, is it the mc or is the mc being groomed?
Do you want him to hook up with someone way older than him don't forget the body is still that of a child
DragonslayerKnight:the mc is grooming children so he can indulge in pedophilia
I'm really curious on what the rewards for 60,70,80,90 and 100 percent are any hints to any of them even a small hint I heard som author's give hints from time to time or maybe a birthday gift from the system for 14 and 15 years old
kamidemond:sorry to hear did not like still need a lot to learn about writing
there are already many hints in the chapters themselves.and I left tons of hints in the upcoming chapters
drago282007:I'm really curious on what the rewards for 60,70,80,90 and 100 percent are any hints to any of them even a small hint I heard som author's give hints from time to time or maybe a birthday gift from the system for 14 and 15 years old
BĂĄsicamente estĂĄs llorando por tonterĂas, es su historia y puede hacer con ella lo que le plazca.
DragonslayerKnight:I didn't say I didn't like it đ although it is a terrible read, I was just giving my honest opinion in review. it would improve significantly if you stopped the pedophilia and grooming children and you just, I don't know wrote a story that was about someone in the Naruto world with a template system that has a consistent plot