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DragonslayerKnight
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poor execution of plot. standard statutory r@pe and pedophilia grooming. low intelligence mc and author. nonsense system that slows the pacing and has multiple plot holes in just about every other chapter.

In Naruto With Minato Template

kamidemond

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kamidemond
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sorry to hear did not like still need a lot to learn about writing

DragonslayerKnight
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I didn't say I didn't like it 😭 although it is a terrible read, I was just giving my honest opinion in review. it would improve significantly if you stopped the pedophilia and grooming children and you just, I don't know wrote a story that was about someone in the Naruto world with a template system that has a consistent plot

kamidemond:sorry to hear did not like still need a lot to learn about writing
MajorLove_Gravy
MajorLove_GravyLv4MajorLove_Gravy

what do you mean grooming, is it the mc or is the mc being groomed?

DragonslayerKnight:I didn't say I didn't like it 😭 although it is a terrible read, I was just giving my honest opinion in review. it would improve significantly if you stopped the pedophilia and grooming children and you just, I don't know wrote a story that was about someone in the Naruto world with a template system that has a consistent plot
DragonslayerKnight
DragonslayerKnightLv4DragonslayerKnight

the mc is grooming children so he can indulge in pedophilia

MajorLove_Gravy:what do you mean grooming, is it the mc or is the mc being groomed?
drago282007
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Do you want him to hook up with someone way older than him don't forget the body is still that of a child

DragonslayerKnight:the mc is grooming children so he can indulge in pedophilia
drago282007
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I'm really curious on what the rewards for 60,70,80,90 and 100 percent are any hints to any of them even a small hint I heard som author's give hints from time to time or maybe a birthday gift from the system for 14 and 15 years old

kamidemond:sorry to hear did not like still need a lot to learn about writing
kamidemond
kamidemondAuthorkamidemond

there are already many hints in the chapters themselves.and I left tons of hints in the upcoming chapters

drago282007:I'm really curious on what the rewards for 60,70,80,90 and 100 percent are any hints to any of them even a small hint I heard som author's give hints from time to time or maybe a birthday gift from the system for 14 and 15 years old
toshisero
toshiseroLv4toshisero

yeah author even make it haku raped by zabuza so mc can became the knight in armor and save her after killing zabuza. im not even saying other sh#t on this trash of a fanfic

Carlos_Perez_1367
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BĂĄsicamente estĂĄs llorando por tonterĂ­as, es su historia y puede hacer con ella lo que le plazca.

DragonslayerKnight:I didn't say I didn't like it 😭 although it is a terrible read, I was just giving my honest opinion in review. it would improve significantly if you stopped the pedophilia and grooming children and you just, I don't know wrote a story that was about someone in the Naruto world with a template system that has a consistent plot
Carlos_Perez_1367
Carlos_Perez_1367Lv1Carlos_Perez_1367

You made randoms cry and that's why I admire you. They forget that the real world is much worse than fanfic and they must get out of their bubble.