Review Detail of Soawn in Azimuth: The Elden Throne (New Version)

The novella is information garbage. Level text = MC went to the toilet to pee, not to poop because ............ description for half the chapter. Description of the level= "I can go talk to those NPC, but I won't go because...... late". Why the hell do I need this information? Ordinary NPC. Simple conversation. The author throws all his thoughts into the text. Imagine writing down all your thoughts. And then you let strangers read it. What effect are you expecting? ALL thoughts. Thought = what I will eat, description for some reason I will eat a sandwich, not an egg.