Review Detail of Fav0ur_rite in Eve's Gambit

I'd admit I really like the story line but it got to a point I started getting irritated. firstly I noticed AI is used in most chapters and nothing hardly makes sense. A lot of people find it difficult to read lots of new words in a sentence and then the sentence just doesn't make sense because you have to keep searching for the meaning of this words, without anyother word in a sentence giving at least a hint of what those new words means and then it becomes actually very boring to read. The story lacks emotions, I can hardly put myself in Eve's shoes.