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Zerga3
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Hello everyone! Writing Quality 4.5/5: Even though English is not my first language, I would consider myself quite good at it. There may be some mistakes there and there, so I hope you guys could help me out in creating a better story by pointing out those mistakes! Stability 5/5: I will post every day. Each chapter is around the same(1.1k words or more) Story development 5/5: At the beginning it may seem like everything's going according the cannon, but it change drastically in the future. I am planning to go a completely different route, even though he is born in Konoha. Character 4/5: I tried my best. World Background ?/5; Idk what to say here, It's Naruto. *** I hope you give it a try!

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Naruto: Reincarnated Zeus

Zerga3

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Xuraa
XuraaLv2Xuraa

Zerga3:No
Azathoth2
Azathoth2Lv4Azathoth2

is this a harem?

Zerga3
Zerga3AuthorZerga3

No

Azathoth2:is this a harem?
streiz
streizLv13streiz

Who is the love interest?

Zerga3:No
ChesterCure
ChesterCureLv4ChesterCure

hmmm, zeus and not a harem? it's like Turning fire into ice.

Zerga3:No
Ur_Mom_Gay_lol
Ur_Mom_Gay_lolLv4Ur_Mom_Gay_lol

tell me he at least smashes everyone's girl

Zerga3:No
BestoFriendo
BestoFriendoLv4BestoFriendo

sorry to say but like most people you forget to write "the" and other things that suggest things. example, Biwako smiled then glanced at lying zeus.At THE lying zeus, the story's good but the writing is not bad either. if we try to compare chinese translations this is still a 4/5 writing