Review Detail of Moduo_Ren in Shadow Monarch: Multiverse Ascendance

Y'know, I thought the point of writing fanfiction is to write something new or put your own spin into the story; NOT taking parts of the original novel and stitching it with your own writing and NOT editing it to make it seem cohesive at the very least.I wouldn't have bat an eye if you had at least made it seem like you wrote the thing yourself, it makes it seem like you didn't put much effort into it.People here in the fanfiction section, are looking for something, at the bare minimum, different from the original. Not the Frankenstein's Monster of a patchwork you made. Some maybe okay with whatever you're making, but others like me, will immediately drop it when they see how low effort the early chapters are.I hope you will do better in the future, if you try writing another fanfiction.