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Cuteness_preacher9
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Honestly, it's an incredible premise and such amazing potential, but it becomes a self insert about the authors dreams extremely quick, so if u like that, read. If not, I'd avoid it.

Naruto The Untouchable (Completed)

kamidemond

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kamidemond
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I am currently rewriting this story. I would advice to read it after 20 days. all the plot holes and other things will will sorted out by then

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DRAVIDIAN
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Are they sorted?

kamidemond:I am currently rewriting this story. I would advice to read it after 20 days. all the plot holes and other things will will sorted out by then
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kamidemond
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they are already there yes but there are still mistake after the rewrite. I will .ow slowly move into each chapter and fix them

DRAVIDIAN:Are they sorted?
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Lordmonke09
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kamidemond:I am currently rewriting this story. I would advice to read it after 20 days. all the plot holes and other things will will sorted out by then
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