Review Detail of Lackada1sical in Naruto The Untouchable (Completed)

Evaluation: Subpar.WQ: Multiple gramm errors which can be improved on. Monotonous dialogues/interaction & redundant thought process. 3/5SD: With a slow to average pace of development and it also lacks MC & story progression since author-san decided to follow cannon/plot which is lackluster. 2/5CD: MC is a transmigrator but his foreknowledge & adult mentality are lacking. MC is like a stupid Naruto with hero complex no kill rule which is the frustrating part as we all know what a NINJA world is. Lacks utilization of NarutoVerse foreknowledge & his earth/previous life experiences. 2/5US: Chapters are short, stability of update is up to speed compared to the quality of this FF. 3/5WB: There's nothing new as author-san decided that MC follows/observe cannon. 3/5Don't be discouraged by the reviews but take it as a challenge to do better. Kudos to author-san and well wishes! xD