Review Detail of OhayoSenpai in Naruto: I'm not a Pervert!

This story in summary is something like. There was a man who put hamburger In hotdog's bread and trying to sell it telling everyone that it's just a hotdog... Story is too confusing .You gave too much details on the start of the story about his family therefore just making room for your story progression but in the same time just making what everyone else make. You aim to heaven but you forgot that you are still on earth. Writing quality is okay, it some this are slightly better it would be 5 star. Updating Stability is ok. In your place I would change title. it's too confusing and it will only make some ppls hate your novel for confusing them and making them waste time .(like me)