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Hello, dear author! I've read your novel and it's really great. Please click on my profile picture, where you can find what you need. The summary provides an intriguing premise for the second part of the series, with Kora's struggles in adjusting to her new life and the introduction of a potential threat to her and the kingdom. However, it could benefit from providing more context and background information for readers who may not have read the first part of the series. Additionally, the final question raised about the Men of the Grey winning the war for Kora's heart feels a bit clichéd and could be rephrased to add more nuance or depth to the potential conflict.

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From the Heart of a Fae

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thank you so much for the feedback I appreciate it !