Review Detail of OliverfINKing in Vengeful Domination
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I'd say my main goal for the novel is to write the most interesting and various personalities possible. I want any relevant character to be unique in a way, so I'd wish the reader to enjoy the psychological side of the story first and foremost. If you find errors or have advice, comment about them and I'll probably edit it right in 1-day max or try to implement the idea. I hope you'll enjoy the story.
Vengeful Domination
OliverfINKing
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Did you mean villains with no morals, motives, and just, boringly evil?I think the same, by heart I can say my favourite, recent villains would be Light Yagami from Death Note, Lelouch from Code Geass and Thanos.I don't know how much chapters you read, but there will be many kind of villains: "complex" or "quick" in varying degrees with respect to the situation.Cain would be a pretty good example of one more on the complex side.Basically, as I wrote in the review I want to write all kinds of personalities...If I got you curious the chapters are waiting for youđđ
Santy_Melay:What I'm tired of is Mc's villains and without morals.
First of all, thank you for the feedback. English is not my first language so I'm sure my grammar isn't perfect. For proofreading, I'm mainly relying on Grammarly. In the synopsis, I tried mainly to arouse the curiosity of the possible reader. If you have already read the first chapter and find the way it's written unclear, I would ask you to go into more actionable details. Even though I'll try to improve the how I find interesting seeing any possible natural improvement in my writing style in the next future. I hope you'll be there when that happens! Have a great dayđ
Shadow_Gamer1:that synapse doesn't even make sense to the end,did a five year old proof read it
