Review Detail of Mi_22 in Vengeful Domination

Item: Vengeful Domination
Rating: 4.2

Review detail

Mi_22Lv111yrMi_22

Never read a novel of this genre before... And it's quite an experience. The grammar was inconsistent (just initially and the author has said he fixed it in further chapters) and the story moves at a fine pace with clarity... my only gripe is that a lot of the things happen within a few passages and it has a lot of 'tell but not show' moments as a good chunk of events just go as mere mentions. Other than that, it's a pretty good novel with solid vision on what's gonna happen and how are they gonna happen.

Vengeful Domination

OliverfINKing

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OliverfINKingAuthorOliverfINKing

Thanks a lot for the honest review! Many times I leave voluntarily many things with not many details because I find it more interesting, from the reader's point of view to know things gradually than have massive info-dumps. Finally, I give the main focus to the rhythm of the story so, for example, if I wrote in detail about the training in the forest I think it would have gotten too slow-paced. I plan on filling these holes in the future, don't worry. I hope you'll still be reading the novel at that time! If you remember the specific ratings, what do you think I can improve? It'd help me a lot if you had time to answer. Anyway, have a great day!

1yr

Mi_22Lv11Mi_22

You're fine as you are... Personally I kinda bothered by the passage of events quickly. maybe it's a preference. You're on a fine path, man... continue.👍

OliverfINKing:Thanks a lot for the honest review! Many times I leave voluntarily many things with not many details because I find it more interesting, from the reader's point of view to know things gradually than have massive info-dumps. Finally, I give the main focus to the rhythm of the story so, for example, if I wrote in detail about the training in the forest I think it would have gotten too slow-paced. I plan on filling these holes in the future, don't worry. I hope you'll still be reading the novel at that time! If you remember the specific ratings, what do you think I can improve? It'd help me a lot if you had time to answer. Anyway, have a great day!
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1yr